Instant fan of this one! Maybe more than the 1-week remix! (I love dissonance a lot, though)
Ok listening through now to the sections you mentioned, I actually really liked how those parts turned out lol. I like glitch and dissonance. I'll still try to see if I can keep it in tune for the next one tho!
Thanks! I'll do some tweaking on it next week when I'm doing my second submission. Like I said in my desc. I was just trying out my own personal "speed remix" challenge on it. Hoping my next one ends up better!
Oh, also 2:22 and onwards has the same issue with being off key. It isn't your fault from what I can tell it's just that the instruments you chose have different pitched keys than the original ones. Yeah :)
I like the ideas kind of although essentially you just switched out the instruments and some of them don't work imo, also it gets very off key from 1:15-1:46 you should work on fixing that.